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Picture this, an empty street,
An empty man with an empty dream.
He meets a stranger's wandering stare,
What he gives back is an empty glare.

A broken man, a fallen flight
Is what the stranger saw that night.
The only man he'd ever see
Walking down that barren street.

For the second he'd stopped to look,
He read him like an open book.
The spine of the book destroyed and torn.
In his palms a giant thorn.

A happy ending is all he lacked.
With a single shot wound to the back,
The empty man fell to the ground,
Left to lay in his blood to drown.

The stranger was broken too that day,
So he dropped to his knees to pray,
"Lord," he said, "I have sinned,
But this is where his story begins.

"That man had walked alone tonight,
He never thought he'd see the light.
I rescued him from his fate
And sent him to dwell amidst your gate.

"Please take him in and treat him well,
He no longer lives in hell."
As he wiped the sweat from his brow,
He whispered, "Lord, he's in your hands now."
©2007-2009 ~Evanescenceheart
:iconevanescenceheart:

Author's Comments

It's called midnight partially because it takes place at midnight, partially because I wrote it at midnight. :)
enjoy.

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:icontpn3:
Wow nicely written, also great wording, congrats!!
:iconmadametwilit:
This is a nice change from you. Quite lovely.
:iconevanescenceheart:
thank you! I'm glad you like it!

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...With a giant hammer

It really is @Vlei's fault...
=PortraitPencilArt
FAQ #18: Who selects the Daily Deviation and how is it chosen?
:iconevanescenceheart:
thankies wifey! <3

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...With a giant hammer

It really is @Vlei's fault...
=PortraitPencilArt
FAQ #18: Who selects the Daily Deviation and how is it chosen?
:icontrigger201:
this has a really nice overall feel to it . . . it begins and concludes and the reader feels alright about it - a sense of completeness :) well, thats what it is like for me ;)
well done :D thanks for sharing!

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I try to digest my pride - but passions grip i fear. When i climb into shallow vats of wine I think i almost hear - but its not clear.
:iconevanescenceheart:
thanks so much and thanks for your wonderful comment

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...With a giant hammer

It really is @Vlei's fault...
=PortraitPencilArt
FAQ #18: Who selects the Daily Deviation and how is it chosen?
:iconnot-undead-fundead:
thats really good. i didnt sag in the middle or anything it kind of enthralled me into the world of the poem. very nice work! :D

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[link]
Look out Emma it's a Krazy Krazy Krogan!
:iconevanescenceheart:
thank you so much! :heart:

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...With a giant hammer

It really is @Vlei's fault...
=PortraitPencilArt
FAQ #18: Who selects the Daily Deviation and how is it chosen?
:iconkaanktea:
like your poems
and ADDORE EVANESCENCE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Your favorite song?

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:blackrose:Man has the mind and the strenght to create but he hasn't created,he only destroyed:blackrose:

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